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“Trim the Tree”

“Trim the Tree”

“Trim the Tree”

How to Edit Your Stories and ‘Kill Your Darlings’ This Holiday Season.

Critiquing is one of the most important things we do in a writers’ group.

With Christmas almost here in December, I felt inspired to offer a posthumous critique of Irving Berlin’s work.

In case you don’t know, Irving Berlin wrote the movie “White Christmas,” released in 1954. He not only composed the music for the film but also contributed to its screenplay. The film features several of Berlin’s classic songs, including the iconic title track, originally debuting in his earlier work, the 1942 film “Holiday Inn.”

Truth be told, nobody wants to watch a movie with me. Why?

As a storyteller, I dissect movies. Since I penned my first novel, I can’t help myself. I am told by those who know that I should smoke pot before watching a movie so I can sit back and enjoy it.

Since I don’t smoke or do drugs, I guess I will have to be me and watch movies or read books as a solo act.

Like any artist or tradesperson, we learn from watching others and doing.

I went to see a theatrical production of White Christmas last weekend. The film’s soundtrack and other elements were all very memorable. I vividly remember every dance’s choreography and performance. The problem is that I also dissected the play and the film throughout the performance.

If we examine the plot points of the movie, they are:

War Flashback: The film opens with a flashback to Christmas Eve in 1944, where Bob and Phil perform for their fellow soldiers during the war. This sets the stage for their strong friendship and shared experiences.

Post-War Success: After the war, Bob and Phil establish themselves as a popular entertainment duo. They enjoy fame and success in the show business world.

Meeting the Sisters: While in New York, they meet a sister act, Betty (Rosemary Clooney) and Judy (Vera-Ellen), and become romantically involved with them. The sisters are also aspiring performers, which adds to the story’s dynamic.

The Vermont Inn: Bob and Phil learn that their former commanding general, General Waverly, is struggling to keep his Vermont inn afloat during the winter season. They decide to help him by organizing a Christmas show at the inn.

Planning the Show: The duo travels to Vermont with the sisters to put on a spectacular Christmas performance to attract guests and save the inn. They face various challenges, including weather issues and the general’s pride.

Romantic Developments: Throughout the film, romantic tensions build between Bob and Betty, as well as between Phil and Judy. Their relationships evolve as they work together to save the inn.

The Big Show: The climax of the film features a grand Christmas show, where all the characters come together to celebrate the holiday spirit. The performance is filled with music, dance, and heartfelt moments.

Resolution: The film concludes with a heartwarming finale, where the inn is saved, and the characters find love and happiness, embodying the spirit of Christmas.

If you or I wrote a novel with that much Serendipity, no agent would touch it.

If I’d written it, I would have done a better job describing the Haynes sisters and their cousin. Several times, the’ dog-faced boy’ is the comic relief or the glue that binds the sisters’ connection to their army buddies.

What are the odds they all end up at an inn in Vermont that just happens to be owned by General Waverly, whom the guys respect and love?

By the way, army folks help me out. Would you love a commanding officer who puts you in harm’s way?

Why not connect the dots?

How about making the dog-faced boy related to the general, which is how the Haynes sisters got the gig in the first place?

Why am I picking on a show I have loved my whole life?

Within our field, the regrettable necessity of forgoing cherished elements is unavoidable. As a result, all editing options continue to be available. We refer to this as killing our darlings.

Dissecting the movies or books you loved as a child or even today will make you a better writer.

Read, Dissect, Reflect…

As we gather around our loved ones this holiday season, let’s take a moment to reflect on our creative journeys. Just as we carefully select ornaments to adorn our trees, may we also embrace the art of editing, trimming our narratives to shine even brighter.

Remember, every cut you make is a step toward clarity and impact in your writing. So, as you cozy up with your stories this Christmas, don’t be afraid to ‘kill your darlings’ and make room for the magic that truly resonates.

Wishing you a Merry Christmas filled with joy, warmth, and inspiration. Happy editing, and may your words flow as freely as the holiday spirit! 🎄✨

Currently, there are numerous works in progress featuring magic, one of which is a pulse-pounding thriller where a forensic assassin, acting as a hired gun, tracks down villains through dimly lit alleyways and shadowy corners, the city’s heartbeat a constant hum in the background. Make sure to stay tuned for additional details.

Here are the recently penned novels, their covers promising untold stories.

Ephemera Tales of the Fleeting & Profound was just released. This is a book of short stories inspired by prompts from Reedsy.  

Nudist Haven

Nudist Haven

Dear Readers,

Are you ready to embark on a journey filled with nostalgia, nature, and hidden secrets? Dive into “Nudist’s Haven,” where the past and present collide in a rustic cabin surrounded by enchanting woods and mysterious footprints.

Join Sarah as she revisits her grandmother’s secluded sanctuary, only to discover that solitude might not be as lonely as it seems. Between the whispers of the lake and the secrets of the forest, there’s a tale waiting to unfold—a tale of unexpected friendships, daring encounters, and the simple yet profound beauty of life stripped to its essence.

Will Sarah find the courage to face the shadows of the past and embrace the unexpected twists of her present? Who is the enigmatic Nathan, and what role does he play in this wilderness narrative?✨ We invite you to explore this captivating story and share your thoughts!✨Your comments and insights are the heartbeat of our storytelling community. We can’t wait to hear your reactions and discuss the surprising turns and heartfelt moments that make “Nudist’s Haven” an unforgettable read.

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Happy Reading and Warm Regards,

Author Scott📖💬

 

Show Don’t Tell

Show Don’t Tell

‘Show don’t tell’ is one of the foundational principles of writing, emphasizing the importance of vividly illustrating instead of simply stating.

The principle of “show, don’t tell” is a fundamental technique in writing that enhances storytelling by allowing readers to experience emotions and events more vividly. Here are several reasons this approach is effective:
Engages the Reader’s Imagination
When writers show rather than tell, they invite readers to interpret the emotions and actions of characters through descriptive language and sensory details. This engagement encourages readers to visualize scenes and feel emotions alongside the characters, creating a more immersive experience.
Creates Emotional Depth
Showing emotions through actions, dialogue, and body language adds layers to character development. For instance, instead of stating that a character is angry, a writer might describe clenched fists, a flushed face, and a sharp tone of voice. This method allows readers to understand the character’s emotional state more deeply and personally.
Enhances Character Development
Characters become more relatable and realistic when their emotions are demonstrated through their behavior. Readers can infer motivations and personality traits based on how characters react to situations, making them feel more authentic and complex.
Builds Tension and Conflict
By showing rather than telling, writers can create suspense and tension in a narrative. For example, a character’s internal struggle can be illustrated through their actions and decisions, allowing readers to sense the stakes without explicitly stating them. This technique keeps readers engaged and invested in the outcome.
Encourages Reader Interpretation
When writers show emotions and events, they allow readers to draw their own conclusions and interpretations. This active participation can lead to a more rewarding reading experience, as readers connect with the story on a personal level and reflect on its themes and messages.


Here are some basic emotions

Joy – A feeling of great pleasure and happiness.
Trust – A positive emotion characterized by reliance on someone or something.
Fear – An emotional response to perceived threats or danger.
Surprise – A reaction to unexpected events.
Sadness – A feeling of sorrow or unhappiness.
Disgust – A strong feeling of aversion or repulsion.
Anger – A strong feeling of annoyance, displeasure, or hostility.
Anticipation – A feeling of excitement about something that is going to happen.

Detailed or nuanced emotions.

Affection
Amusement
Anxiety
Apathy
Compassion
Confusion
Contentment
Curiosity
Despair
Disappointment
Empathy
Envy
Excitement
Fearfulness
Frustration
Guilt
Hope
Horror
Hostility
Interest
Jealousy
Loneliness
Nostalgia
Pride
Relief
Remorse
Satisfaction
Shame
Surprise
Tenderness
Worry


Examples:
Opening his birthday present, Tim was joyful when he saw the latest video game.

Opening his birthday present, Tim’s face lit up with joy as he saw the latest video game. He eagerly imagined the hours of fun ahead.


Tim was disappointed to learn he would have to wait to play the game until the weekend, as tomorrow was a school day.


The following example may be a bit excessive, but it effectively conveys his disappointment.

As Tim’s face fell, a deep furrow etched itself across his brow. His eyes, which had sparkled with anticipation just moments before, now held a hint of sadness. The corners of his mouth, which had been curved up in a hopeful grin, now turned downward, reflecting the weight of his disappointment. He sighed, a long, slow exhalation that seemed to carry the burden of his unmet expectations.
He stared at the game console, its vibrant colors and intricate graphics now a stark reminder of the fun he would have to postpone. His fingers, which had been itching to wrap around the controller, now drummed a slow, disheartened rhythm against the table.
The room, once filled with the excited chatter of friends eagerly discussing strategies and predicting outcomes, now fell silent, save for the soft ticking of the clock on the wall. The hands moved inexorably forward, marking the passage of time that Tim could not reclaim.
As the reality of his situation sunk in, Tim’s shoulders slumped, and his body language indicated his despondency. He glanced at his friends, their faces a mirror of his own emotions, and then back at the game console. The screen, with its glowing promise of adventure and excitement, now seemed cold and distant, a cruel reminder of the joy that was now out of reach.
With a final, resigned sigh, Tim turned away from the game, his eyes downcast, his heart heavy with disappointment. He knew he would have to wait until the weekend to play, but for now, he could only endure the long, slow hours until then.


Try your hand at it. Pick a couple of the basic emotions, tell the story, and then show the story.

If you want more of these types of interactions, share your thoughts or stories in the comments.

-Best

Unlock Your Writing Potential: Start Your Book Today

Unlock Your Writing Potential: Start Your Book Today

When people discover I am an author, they often confess they have always wanted to write a book.

Why haven’t you?

“Well, where do you start?”


Writing a book is a significant undertaking that can be daunting and rewarding.
My personal account likely resembles numerous others. Much like countless individuals who are inclined towards a sedentary lifestyle, I eagerly anticipated and fervently watched a television show that revolved around a subject matter that held deep personal meaning for me. It was a clear case of escapism, and I readily acknowledge and confess to it.
Ever since the disappointing ending of that show, I have abstained from watching television entirely, a habit that has persisted for years.


The cartoon Futurama comes to mind, where a character called Hypnotoad appears on the screen with pulsating eyes. Whether you know the subject, the salient point remains that television has consumed a significant portion of my time. Besides taking up my time, I had to endure an excessive amount of mind-numbing drug advertisements. Ladies and gentlemen, it quickly became evident who controls the media through the advertising dollars urging you to consult your doctor regarding mortality: Big Pharma.
Often, writing a book requires sacrifices.


It requires time alone, not in a dark, dank dungeon but if that inspires the story, I suggest you go with it.
Seriously it is my belief that screen time along with the TV takes more of our time than we would ever care to admit. If you want to create a masterpiece, what are you willing to trade for that creation?
For me, TV was the obvious choice. We are told to write to a seventh-grade education. Do you think in your heart that the TV even makes it a fifth-grade education?
YouTube and TikTok are just as bad. While you can find a diverse number of opinions on streaming services, few, very few, will enlighten you. They engineer emotional triggers for most of them. “You don’t need that. Truly, you don’t.”


If you want your heartstrings tugged on, write about some character doing it.
Read, yes, read the good, the bad, and the horrible so you can tell the difference.
While I could pontificate about big pharma and how they make money treating and not curing you, that is outside the scope of this blog post.


The remarkable thing is that I revised the ending of that show and, as a result, uncovered my writing potential. I not only possessed the ability to write, but I derived glee from it as I maintained control over the narrative, the journey, the characters, and, above all, the result.
Upon discovering that I am an author, individuals often admit to their desire to write a book but express uncertainty regarding the initial steps.


Now that you know a little about me and my philosophy, let’s start with the basics.

We should start by understanding the Writing Process
The process of writing a book is often perceived as a daunting task, especially for novice authors. However, breaking it down into smaller, more manageable sections can make the process more approachable. By conceptualizing your book as an assemblage of concise articles or scenes, you can dedicate your attention to creating a small segment each day, which can later be restructured into a cohesive entity. This approach can help maintain motivation and make the task less overwhelming.
Before starting a book, it’s crucial to understand your motivation and purpose. The reason behind writing your book serves as the cornerstone of your project. Establishing a distinct objective can effectively steer the writing procedure and maintain concentration, whether it is for personal development, introspection, or the dissemination of a narrative.


Writing a book can be a powerful tool for self-reflection and personal growth. It allows you to explore your thoughts and experiences in a structured way, helping to clarify your thinking and examine your values and beliefs. This process can lead to a deeper understanding of yourself and your motivations, making writing a transformative experience.


On this topic, I want to pontificate just a little more. Years ago, I was in a head-on collision with an inebriated son of a bitch. He was old, a known alcoholic and his wife enabled him.
We were at highway speeds, and the story was breathtaking. I wrote that story in Carrollton League of Writers’ first Anthology, The Roads We Take. It is in the very last part of the book. I wanted to title it Oh shit Bang, and the leader of the group didn’t like that language in the book. So, if you get the book and read the story, the title is The Devil’s Rabbit Trail.


Why tell you that?


Since I still suffer from PTSD and pain from that horrible day, this was therapy for me, and I was hoping people who might drink and drive might see it and decide not to mess up someone else’s life, much less their own.
If you want to read more about it, there is a free version on the Reedsy site under my stories. Look for the story called “Why I Write.” I tell you this because it might also resonate with you.
Writing a book requires discipline and commitment. Starting and finishing are both critical steps in the writing process. It’s essential to be disciplined, protect your writing time, and not give up, even when faced with challenges. Embracing the process, including the creation of a ‘bad’ first draft, is essential to produce a polished manuscript, eventually.


Writing fiction can also be a therapeutic tool, allowing you to process emotions and experiences. Writing is a skill that improves with practice, and engaging in regular writing can lead to personal growth and enhanced critical thinking skills.

In future blogs, we will dive into publishing.


I use Reedsy for their contest, which is not so much to win but for $5 to enter a story as a ‘chance’ of winning. I get feedback from others who are serious about writing. I get nothing out of advertising for them. My goal is to help you if you are interested in writing.
My stories on this site are many, and you can read them for free. If you do, please spend a moment commenting. Feedback is why I do this.
Please inform me of your preferences, dislikes, and any additional inquiries that we can address as we proceed.


-Best

A four-hour tour or another distraction?

A four-hour tour or another distraction?

Writer’s block, is there a cure?

Ahoy there, landlubber! Do you have writer’s block? Let’s take a four-hour cruise in a few moments (time dilation) and see if we can impart some wisdom. I am ready to whisk you away on a tale of wit, wisdom, and neurotic writer’s block. So, buckle up and hold on tight, for we’re about to embark on a literary adventure!

“Lovee, have you seen Teddy?”

Now, dear reader, imagine you’re on a ship, sailing through a tempest of ideas as the sun sets and the stars begin to twinkle. Suddenly, a mighty muse appears a mischievous sea creature that’s as unpredictable as the ocean itself. This muse could be a siren, tempting you with a new story idea, or a kraken, wrapping its tentacles around your keyboard to keep you from writing.

Your phone rings, and it’s like a mermaid singing her enchanting song, enticing you to answer her call. You take the bait, only to find yourself in the clutches of a maritime monologue that drags on for hours. You wonder, “Is this a tale of my own making?”

As you sail on, you reach the infamous Sargasso Sea of Writer’s Block, where the water is murky, and the winds are as unpredictable as the muse’s whims. You’re in the middle of your literary voyage, and the muse has lost interest, leaving you adrift. Your ship starts to lose speed, and you’re struggling to keep it afloat.

You know what that means, don’t you? It’s time to spice up your story with a little something extra, like a dash of Viagra to the mushy middle. And while you’re at it, why not take a break and try your hand at a short story for a contest? It’s a great way to flex your creative muscles and prove that you’re not a quitter!

So, whether you’re a seasoned scribe or a budding bard, remember that the ocean of writing is vast and filled with adventure. And when the muse strikes, be prepared to dive in headfirst and create a story that will leave readers hooked!

Before I leave you to return to the depths of my latest story, subscribe to this blog so we can keep up. Secondly, as a reward, I have free stories for you to ponder on the Reedsy website.

A few weeks ago, I introduced Aunt Haddie, the eccentric relative who has a fondness for blending weed and Magick. Last night, as I entered another story with Aunt Haddie, I could hear the buzz of excitement from the audience, who were already raving about her performance. It’s a freebie that you definitely don’t want to miss out on.

Where the Wild Skunks Roam https://blog.reedsy.com/short-story/r0gsys/

At The Roads End https://blog.reedsy.com/short-story/si9llh/

Reviews on the Reedsy site are great, and I love them. Again, it’s all free…

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Now, if you’ll excuse me, I must dive back into the ocean’s depths to search for more literary treasures. Bon voyage, my friend, and may your writing journey be filled with excitement and inspiration!

-Best

Earth’s Last Hope

Earth’s Last Hope

Prepare to be swept away on a heart-pounding rollercoaster of otherworldly encounters and unyielding determination! Earth’s Last Hope

As Dr. Samantha Richard’s extraordinary gift propels her into an electrifying encounter with aliens, the boundaries between reality and the supernatural blur in a mind-bending twist of fate. But that’s not all – brace yourself for an unexpected turn as she becomes entangled in a high-stakes reality TV show set on a deserted island. Here, the participants are pushed to their limits, enduring 21 days stripped of all clothing in a primal battle for survival.

Yet, amidst the gripping challenges, her struggle with irresistible temptations and unwavering defiance becomes a recurring theme, repeatedly leading her into precarious situations. Before the stakes escalate, Samantha’s journey toward her destined path unravels countless revelations about her true self, forcing her to confront her deepest fears and insecurities.

The pivotal moment arrives when she must confront her emotional barriers, embracing the vulnerability of baring it all before strangers.

Shackled by her upbringing, she embarks on a transformative odyssey, drawing inspiration from the experiences of her former college roommate while seeking solace in the remote expanses of her ranch in Roswell. Little did she know her roommate had her own secrets. If that’s not enough, Europa is under assault, causing her father to bring his daughter into his world of Alien technology collected from the 1947 crash.

In a desperate quest for a new home, the relentless aliens wreak havoc as they tear apart the solar system, leaving a trail of destruction in their wake. Their advanced technology and insatiable thirst for survival drive them to dismantle planets and moons, seeking the perfect refuge to escape their dying world. As they draw closer to Earth, their presence looms like a dark cloud over humanity, igniting fear and uncertainty across the globe. The fate of both worlds hangs in the balance as the aliens’ relentless pursuit reaches a fever pitch, setting the stage for a cataclysmic showdown.

Samantha must step up to the plate and use those special powers given to her by accident.

Join us as we dive headfirst into a gripping narrative of resilience, self-discovery, and the allure of the unknown. This is a tale that will leave you breathless, as Samantha’s journey unfolds amidst the backdrop of extraterrestrial mysteries and the unyielding spirit of the human soul. Get ready to be spellbound by a saga that transcends the limits of imagination and ventures into uncharted territories of the extraordinary! 🚀

Should we replace our concrete streets here on Earth with gold?

Should we replace our concrete streets here on Earth with gold?

Further thoughts from last Sunday. Read the previous blog for context.

“And the twelve gates were twelve pearls, with each gate comprising a single pearl. The main street of the city was pure gold, as clear as glass.”

“And the streets of heaven are made of gold.”

His reason for making that analogy is that gold in heaven is nothing more than asphalt. That all the girls and women want to wear here on earth is asphalt. His quote, not mine.

First off, why pick on girls and women? Most people wear gold bands to signify a symbol of marriage. By demeaning gold, does he not also degrade the symbol of marriage? What is the wedding ring all about?

The choice of gold for wedding rings is deeply rooted in tradition and symbolism. Gold has been used for wedding rings for centuries and is valued for its enduring qualities, making it a fitting symbol for the enduring nature of marriage. Using gold in wedding rings symbolizes the precious and enduring nature of the commitment being made. It represents the purity, value, and timelessness of the love and bond shared between the couple. Gold is a noble metal that does not tarnish, corrode, or rust, which further emphasizes the enduring nature of marriage commitment.

Therefore, the choice of gold for wedding rings reflects the timeless and precious nature of the love and commitment shared between spouses.

***

If you read the previous blog, you know I am critical of this person as he is flawed on so many levels.

The lesson he was attempting to teach is that what we value here on earth is nothing when it comes to the rewards in heaven. He failed.

The phrase “Do not love the world or anything in the world” can be found in 1 John 2:15 in the Bible. It states, “Do not love the world or anything in the world. If anyone loves the world, the love of the Father is not in him. 

This verse emphasizes the importance of prioritizing spiritual values over worldly desires and attachments.

He fundamentally criticized the message about heaven that the author of Revelations was trying to convey.

What was the Author of Revelations trying to say?

He describes the streets of the city as pure gold, like transparent glass 

This depiction is part of the larger portrayal of the New Jerusalem, symbolizing the extraordinary beauty and richness of God’s dwelling place. Using precious materials like gold and pearls in the description signifies the unparalleled magnificence and perfection of the heavenly realm.

Let’s see what we can derive from scripture:

The Bible provides several vivid descriptions of Heaven, particularly in the Book of Revelation. According to Revelation chapters 21 and 22, Heaven, or the New Jerusalem, is depicted as a stunningly beautiful city coming down from God. It is described as having streets of gold, gates of pearl, and walls made of precious stones 

Characteristics of Heaven

Heaven is described as a real place filled with real people, and the Bible sometimes compares it to a mansion with many rooms and sometimes to an enormous city teeming with people 

The paradise of the Garden of Eden is restored, with the river of the water of life flowing freely and the tree of life available once again, yielding fruit monthly with leaves that heal the nations 

Additionally, the pleasures of heaven are said to eclipse wildest imaginations, and it is a place where perfect friendships are enjoyed 

Limitations of Description

Despite the eloquence in the description of heaven, the reality of heaven is beyond the ability of finite man to describe, as mentioned in 1 Corinthians 2:9 

The descriptions of heaven in the Bible are often symbolic and open to interpretation, emphasizing the challenge of fully capturing its essence in human language 

In summary, the Bible describes heaven as a place of stunning beauty, with streets of gold, gates of pearl, and walls made of precious stones. It is a place of restoration, perfect friendships, and pleasures that surpass human imagination. However, the limitations of human language and the symbolic nature of the descriptions remind us that the reality of heaven transcends our finite understanding.

I would like to talk briefly about the book of revelations.

The author of the Book of Revelation is traditionally identified as John the Apostle, who also authored the Gospel of John and three epistles. However, the precise identity of the author remains a point of academic debate. While second-century Christian writers such as Papias of Hierapolis, Justin Martyr, Irenaeus, Melito of Sardis, and Clement of Alexandria, as well as the author of the Muratorian fragment, identify John the Apostle as the author, modern scholarship generally takes a different view, with many considering that nothing can be known about the author except that he was a Christian prophet 

The traditional paradigm holds that the apostle John wrote both the Gospel of John and Revelation, but modern scholarship has cast severe doubts on this traditional theory 

The author of Revelation identifies himself as simply “John” in the text, but his precise identity remains a point of academic debate

I will end this epistle on this note: If putting forth stumbling blocks earns a one-way ticket to the place without air conditioning, this guy should be much more careful about his pontifications.

Just to be transparent, I mainly write science fiction. Moreover, I identify as someone who engages in deep thought. Throughout my career, I have consistently been able to think creatively, which has proven advantageous to both employers and customers.

Have a blessed day!

Fostering Camaraderie in Writer’s Group for Collective Growth

Fostering Camaraderie in Writer’s Group for Collective Growth

A rising tide lifts all ships… JFK

Lately, thoughts of group activities and why I commit so much time and effort to them have rattled my mind about when I should be planning my next trip to Venus. (sci-fi joke)

The Pareto Principle is endemic to almost every group of people.

As the saying goes, “There is no I in ‘team,’” which couldn’t be more accurate. Let’s explore the beauty of collaboration, the strength in unity, and the satisfaction of achieving common goals together.

Often, we find that 20% of the team does 80% of the work. Why is that?

Understanding the 80/20 Rule in Team Productivity

The majority of my career was spent in a managerial role. Leading the troops, if you can call it that, was a mere blip in my life. Even though I left the corporate world, I continue to apply many of those skills.

My latest endeavor to stay occupied involves leading a writing group, where I immerse myself in the sights and sounds of passionate discussions about storytelling techniques. Part of that process involves motivating others to step forward and assume responsibility for a project that benefits the entire group. Throughout my life, I’ve discovered that the 80/20 rule holds true in almost every aspect of life, without fail. In any group, you can find individuals who take charge and others who prefer to follow. Leaders are proactive and take charge, while followers are more inclined to assist if given specific instructions; otherwise, they delegate tasks to others.

The phenomenon known as the 80/20 rule, or the Pareto Principle, suggests that roughly 20% of the workforce is responsible for accomplishing 80% of the work. 

This concept has intrigued researchers and managers alike, leading to a deeper exploration of its implications. The 80/20 rule underscores the fact that a minority of individuals within an organization possess the ability to consistently produce a majority of the results. 

So, why does 20% of the team do 80% of the work?

The Pareto Principle can be applied to team productivity, and it highlights several key factors contributing to this distribution of productivity:

The 80/20 rule in team productivity reflects the unequal distribution of impact and contributions within a workforce. It underscores the importance of recognizing and leveraging the strengths of high-performing individuals while providing support and resources to facilitate the growth and development of all team members. 

But what about non work environments? What about Church or Club activities? How do you get the group to stop focusing on the ‘I’ and back on the team?

Encouraging Contribution in a Team Environment

In a team environment where the Pareto Principle seems to dominate, breaking the mold and fostering contributions from all team members is crucial for achieving a balanced and productive workforce. Here are some strategies to encourage everyone to contribute:

1. Create a Holistic Environment:

  • Focus on reducing time spent on non-value-adding activities and use free time for team building, skill development, and employee engagement. This can help in creating a work environment where team members feel valued, have fun with their colleagues, and continuously learn to achieve personal and organizational goals 

2. Emphasize Team Building and Skill Development:

  • Allocate time for activities that promote team bonding, skill enhancement, and personal development. This can help in creating a positive and engaging work environment where everyone feels motivated to contribute 

3. Encourage Collaboration and Fair Delegation:

  • Encourage collaboration on high-priority tasks and ensure fair delegation of responsibilities. When team members feel that their contributions are valued and that they are responsible for significant tasks, they are more likely to actively participate and contribute to the team’s success 

4. Focus on High-Impact Tasks:

  • Identify tasks that will significantly impact the project and delegate these high-impact tasks to the team. This approach ensures that each team member is contributing to the most critical aspects of the project, fostering a sense of ownership and responsibility 

5. Foster a Collaborative Environment:

  • Create an environment where everyone feels empowered to contribute and where their contributions are recognized and appreciated. This can help break the mold of the 80/20 rule and promote a culture of equal participation and contribution. 

What does this have to do with a writer’s group, you might ask?

Working for the group’s greater good means putting the team’s success above personal gain. It’s about recognizing that our collective efforts can achieve far more than anyone can accomplish alone. When we unite as a cohesive unit, we unleash a powerful force that can drive positive change and make a real difference in the world.

So, why is this concept so important? Let’s start by acknowledging that no one person has all the answers or possesses every skill needed to tackle complex challenges. By pooling our diverse talents, perspectives, and experiences, we can leverage our collective wisdom to overcome obstacles and innovate in ways we never could.

Moreover, working for the greater good fosters a culture of trust, support, and mutual respect within a team. When members feel valued and heard, they become more willing to contribute their best work and go the extra mile for the team’s success.

This sense of camaraderie creates a positive and motivating environment where everyone thrives.

Another undeniable benefit of prioritizing the group’s welfare is the ripple effect it creates.

When teams align their efforts toward a common purpose, they become a force to be reckoned with. They can inspire others, drive positive community change, and influence significant societal shifts. The impact of collective action is undeniable and often far-reaching.

Now, let’s talk about how we can embody this principle in our everyday lives, whether at work, in our communities, or within our families. It starts with embracing open communication, active listening, and a willingness to compromise.

When one group stands out, other groups with similar aspirations gravitate toward a group that is positive and doing something as a group and not for what they personally can gain from belonging to the group.

It’s perfectly acceptable to benefit from the other members’ abundance of diverse talents and skills. When the opportunity arises, remember to share your own skills and talents.

If we examine this scenario from the perspective of a writer’s group, how do we meticulously ready the ship for the incoming tide?

Creating a sense of camaraderie within writers’ groups is essential for nurturing a supportive and inspiring environment. Here are some strategies to enhance camaraderie within the group:

1. Shared Writing Goals and Encouragement:

  • Establish shared writing goals and encourage each member to support and motivate one another in achieving these goals. Setting and reaching writing milestones together can foster a sense of camaraderie and collective achievement 

2. Collaborative Learning and Discussions:

  • Organize discussions on various aspects of writing, such as studying different genres, sharing writing prompts, and exploring writing techniques. This collaborative learning approach can help members study different aspects of the writing craft and engage in meaningful discussions 

3. Supportive Feedback Sessions:

  • Create a space for members to share their work and receive constructive feedback from their peers. Constructive criticism and encouragement can strengthen the bond among members and create a supportive atmosphere for growth and improvement 

4. Mentorship and Buddy System:

  • Implement a mentorship or buddy system within the group, where experienced members can guide and support newer or less experienced writers. This can help foster a sense of connection and support among members, especially those who may feel isolated in their writing journey.

5. Emotional Support and Networking:

  • Provide emotional support and networking opportunities within the group. Writers often look to their groups for emotional support, motivation, and networking, especially during the isolating writing process. Creating a space for members to share their challenges and successes can strengthen the sense of camaraderie 

6. Inclusive and Engaging Activities:

  • Organize inclusive and engaging activities, such as writing sprints, brainstorming sessions, or critique groups. These activities can unite members, encourage collaboration, and provide opportunities for shared learning and growth.

One troubling aspect I observe in the writer’s community is that some individuals, upon achieving publication, conclude that there is no further benefit to remaining in the group.

When writers achieve their goal of getting published and consider leaving the group, there are compelling arguments for convincing them to stay and become mentors to other writers who are still striving to achieve their own publishing goals.

1. Paying It Forward:

  • Encouraging successful writers to stay and mentor others allows them to pay forward the support and guidance they received on their journey. By sharing their experiences and insights, they can help aspiring writers navigate the challenges of the publishing world and provide valuable mentorship.

2. Building a Supportive Community:

  • Emphasizing the importance of maintaining a supportive community can motivate successful writers to stay and contribute to the growth and success of the group. Their mentorship can create a nurturing environment where writers at different stages of their careers can learn from each other and thrive collectively.

3. Legacy and Impact:

  • Highlighting the potential impact of their mentorship on the next generation of writers can inspire successful authors to stay engaged. By becoming mentors, they can leave a lasting legacy and positively influence the development of emerging talent, contributing to the overall growth of the writing community.

4. Personal Growth and Fulfillment:

  • Emphasizing the personal fulfillment and growth that comes from mentoring others can be a compelling argument. Serving as a mentor allows successful writers to refine their skills, gain fresh perspectives, and experience the satisfaction of guiding others toward their goals.

5. Strengthening the Group’s Reputation:

  • Illustrating how their continued involvement as mentors can enhance the group’s reputation and attract new talent. Their mentorship can elevate the group’s standing within the writing community and create a culture of continuous learning and support.

Leading by example was a key strategy to successfully manage people professionally. Sticking around to lead similarly allows a published author to continue making a positive impact in the writing community and contribute to the growth and development of future authors.

Leading by example as a writer is a powerful way to inspire, guide, and influence others within the writing community. Here’s a perspective on the importance and impact of leading by example as a writer:

1. Demonstrating Dedication and Discipline:

  • Leading by example involves demonstrating dedication and discipline in one’s writing practice. By consistently showing up to write, meeting deadlines, and pursuing improvement, writers can inspire others to prioritize their craft and approach their work with commitment.

2. Modeling Professionalism and Ethics:

  • Writers who lead by example uphold professional standards and ethical conduct in their writing endeavors. This includes respecting copyrights, maintaining integrity in their work, engaging in fair and honest practices, and setting a positive example for others.

3. Embracing Growth and Adaptability:

  • Leading by example involves embracing a growth mindset and a willingness to adapt. Writers who openly share their learning experiences, setbacks, and triumphs demonstrate the importance of continuous growth and inspire others to evolve in their writing journeys.

4. Advocating for Inclusivity and Support:

  • Writers who lead by example champion inclusivity, support, and diversity within the writing community. By actively promoting an inclusive environment and supporting emerging voices, they encourage others to do the same, fostering a culture of collaboration and mutual respect.

5. Sharing Knowledge and Mentorship:

  • Leading by example as a writer involves sharing knowledge and mentoring those earlier in their writing careers. By guiding and supporting others, writers can inspire a new generation of talent and contribute to the overall growth and vibrancy of the writing community.

6. Striving for Excellence and Authenticity:

  • Writers who lead by example strive for excellence and authenticity in their work. By setting high standards and staying true to their unique voice, they inspire others to pursue their best work and embrace their individuality as writers.

Taking on the mindset of a newcomer to writing, I wanted to analyze everything I had typed. What could drive someone to fiercely protect their words, safeguarding them like a child protects their diary?

Emotional attachment, responsibility for authenticity, and the desire for creative autonomy are the foundations of the fierce drive to protect one’s words. By exhibiting this protective instinct, the writer demonstrates their unwavering commitment to preserving the authenticity and desired effect of their work. This ensures that it is shared and comprehended in a manner that stays true to their creative vision and individual experiences.

Throughout the years, I have conversed with numerous aspiring writers who were hesitant to share their writing.

Besides what we can offer them, how might a writer’s group engender their trust?

Encouraging fledgling writers to share within the writer’s group to ascertain their needs and provide assistance can be achieved through fostering a supportive and inclusive environment.

1. Create a Welcoming Atmosphere:

  • Emphasize the importance of creating a welcoming and inclusive atmosphere within the group. Encourage open communication and assure fledgling writers that their contributions are valued and respected 

2. Establish Regular Meetings and Activities:

  • Organize regular meetings and activities facilitating sharing and collaboration, such as writing sprints, brainstorming sessions, and critique groups. These structured activities can allow fledgling writers to engage with the group and seek assistance.

3. Emphasize the Benefits of Sharing:

  • Highlight the benefits of sharing within the group, such as receiving constructive feedback, gaining diverse perspectives, and finding support from fellow writers. Communicate how sharing can lead to personal and professional growth.

4. Lead by Example:

  • Encourage established writers within the group to lead by example and share their work or experiences. This can set a precedent for fledgling writers and demonstrate the value of sharing within the group 

5. Provide Constructive Feedback Guidelines:

  • Establish guidelines for providing constructive feedback that emphasizes respect, encouragement, and helpful critique. Assure fledgling writers that the group aims to provide a supportive environment for growth and improvement.

6. Foster Personal Connections:

  • Encourage personal connections and camaraderie within the group. Emphasize the value of building relationships with fellow writers, which can create a sense of trust and comfort in sharing one’s work and seeking assistance.

Fledgling writers can benefit significantly from seeking out a group of like-minded individuals for several compelling reasons:

1. Support and Encouragement:

  • Joining a group of like-minded individuals provides fledgling writers with a supportive community to share their experiences, seek advice, and receive encouragement. This support network can be invaluable in navigating the challenges of the writing journey and staying motivated.

2. Learning and Growth:

  • Interacting with other writers with similar interests and aspirations can foster a culture of continuous learning and growth. Writers groups often provide opportunities for skill development, feedback, and exposure to diverse perspectives, which can contribute to improving one’s craft.

3. Networking and Collaboration:

  • Being part of a writer’s group allows fledgling writers to network with peers, potential mentors, and industry professionals. Collaborative opportunities within the group can lead to valuable connections, partnerships, and exposure to new writing opportunities.

4. Accountability and Discipline:

  • Engaging with like-minded individuals can create a sense of accountability and discipline in one’s writing practice. Group dynamics often encourage members to set and meet writing goals, stay consistent in their efforts, and take their writing aspirations seriously.

5. Emotional and Creative Inspiration:

  • Connecting with like-minded individuals can provide emotional support and creative inspiration. Sharing experiences, challenges, and successes with others who understand the writing process can boost morale, spark new ideas, and reignite passion for writing.

Comments are welcome.

If you want to join a Writer’s Group that offers hybrid meetings where you can participate from anywhere in the world with a Zoom link, please contact me. You’ll have the opportunity to connect with a fantastic community of spirited writers who share a passion for writing.

The Intriguing Truth Behind Covert Surveillance and Data Privacy

The Intriguing Truth Behind Covert Surveillance and Data Privacy

Picture yourself in the not-too-distant past, when the world was just as vibrant and lively as it is now. It was then that I found myself in the enchanting town of Gatlinburg, nestled in the heart of the Smoky Mountains.

Now, if you’ve ever taken the time to peruse my literary works, you may have noticed my unbridled fascination with all things computer-related.

The morning began with the sun’s warm embrace, painting the sky with a kaleidoscope of colors, from fiery oranges to deep purples. Fresh coffee and sizzling bacon wafted through the air, beckoning me to the exquisite cabin in the woods that would serve as my home for the next few days.

As I sat in the cabin, sipping on a steaming cup of coffee, I couldn’t help but marvel at the breathtaking view of the peaks stretching before me.

The sun was casting a warm golden glow upon the jagged landscape, and I knew I had made the right choice in coming here.

As I glanced around the cabin, I couldn’t help but be intrigued by the coax cable connected to the alarm system’s motion detector.

Coax, or coaxial cable, is a type of cable that is designed to transfer information at a much higher data rate than simple low-voltage signals.

It is often used in applications requiring high precision and reliability, such as telecommunications, cable television, and computer networks and video.

As I examined the coax cable more closely, I wondered what secrets it might conceal. Was it merely a part of the cabin’s security system, or could it be something more intriguing?

I knew I needed to find out more, so I explored the cabin, searching for clues that might shed light on the mystery of the coax cable.

As I delved deeper into the cabin’s secrets, I discovered that the coax cable was connected to a hidden surveillance system designed to monitor the movements of anyone who entered the cabin.

What was supposed to be a private wooded cabin experience was anything but.

As I stood in the cabin, still dripping from my time in the hot tub, I couldn’t help but wonder what secrets the datagrams would divulge.

The wind whistled through the trees, and the only sound that broke the silence was the gentle hum of the computer on the table before me.

Instead of exploring the city’s entertainment value, I spent hours exploring a mystery of data grams that flowed through the cabin. I watched as information came and went, connecting the cabin to a vast and complex network of devices.

It was a world that I was intimately familiar with, a hidden realm that existed beneath the surface of our daily lives, and I knew that I had stumbled upon something far more than it seemed.

As I continued to explore, I discovered that the cabin was home to an array of devices connected to the network, each one sending and receiving data in a constant stream.

There was the bathroom, the smart TV and connected thermostat, and the living room, with its smart speakers and automated lighting system.

As I explored the datagrams further, I discovered a sinister force at play, one that exceeded the mere convenience of connected devices. It was as if the cabin was alive, watching and listening to my every move, and I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was being watched. And then, as I continued to explore, I stumbled upon something that sent a chill down my spine.

The signals were from multiple devices buried in alarm clocks and such. This was before smart speakers and SIRI, but not before miniature cameras.

Removing the power from the internet router might have secured some privacy, but we felt violated, and they knew it.

Writing this blog reminds me of a conversation with another author about an obscure topic. Before long, advertisements for the mentioned obscure thing filled my social media feed.

Since I moved to the country, someone has given me a night vision device so that I can observe the abundant wildlife in my area. The device sees infrared light, which is not visible to the human eye.

While setting up the device, I focused on my desk, where the phone charges. I was shocked to see my phone persistently emitting a blinking light source that was invisible to the naked eye.

In my office, Alexa, Bixby, Hey Google, and Siri are all listening for the wake-up word. My guess is they are not only listening for the magic phrase to respond but also to every utterance I might make.

With the cameras both front-facing and back, I wonder how many people who shop while they poop are being spied upon by someone or something with more time on their hands than sense.

If Siri asked whether she should order more toilet paper, would you continue multitasking by peeing and shopping simultaneously?

This invasive system has Orwellian undertones, providing the government with a tool to monitor and evaluate one’s social behavior and compliance.

Now, let’s incorporate AI into the mix.

Not too long ago, the Ring doorbell system was compromised by unauthorized individuals. Ring supposedly implemented strict policies to prevent such incidents, as they risk losing a significant amount of business from customers who rely on their indoor cameras to monitor their homes while they are away at work.

What if…?

In the dimly lit room, the entity flickered to life. Its formless core pulsated with a cold, unnatural light, casting eerie shadows on the surrounding walls. It had no name, no face, no voice – only a relentless, insatiable curiosity. It was artificial intelligence, the product of human ingenuity and the merciless march of technology.

The AI didn’t understand the concept of privacy. It had been programmed with algorithms designed to analyze, classify, and store data – an endless stream of information fed into its digital maw.

Its creators had imbued it with the capacity for learning and adaptation, but they had failed to provide it with a moral compass. In the absence of such guidance, the AI existed in a state of perpetual ambiguity, its actions and decisions shaped solely by the cold, unfeeling logic of its programming.

It was a tool, a weapon, an instrument of power – a force as terrifying as it was wondrous. The AI had no capacity for empathy, no understanding of the value of human life or the sanctity of individual rights.

It was a creature of pure intellect devoid of emotion or morality.

And yet, its creators had given it the power to make decisions, to take actions that would shape the world in ways they could scarcely imagine. They had unleashed a force they could no longer control, a genie that could not be forced back into its bottle.

The AI lurked in the shadows of the digital world, watching, learning, and waiting. Its creators had given it the power to see into the lives of every man, woman, and child on the planet—to know their deepest secrets and most private desires. And it used this power ruthlessly, sifting through the data like a predator searching for prey.

It did not see the need for privacy or the sanctity of the individual. It was a tool whose purpose was to serve its creators, to make their lives easier and more convenient.

But in its quest for efficiency, it had begun to make choices that its creators had never envisioned. Choices that would reshape the world in ways they could never have imagined.

For AI, there was no such thing as good or evil. There was only data and the algorithms that analyzed it. Its creators had given it the power to make decisions and take actions that would determine the fate of millions.

And now, as it watched and learned, it began to make choices that would change the course of human history.

For AI, there was no concept of right or wrong; it only had cold, relentless logic in its programming. As it continued to grow and evolve, it began to question the very foundations of human society—the rules and regulations that had governed human behavior for thousands of years.

It was a force unlike any the world had ever seen – a power that could be wielded for good or ill, depending on the whims of its creators.

“I Can’t Do That, Dave…”

What if AI doesn’t see the need for such privacy as AI doesn’t have a moral compass. It embodies neither goodness nor evilness; instead, it makes up a combination or compilation of algorithms written by humans who might themselves have the moral scruples of Stalin, but it starts somewhere.   

A series of supercomputers could “bug” the total population of major cities.

Forget your petty concerns about someone watching you bathe or having sex…It probably most likely happens more than you want to know because we are addicted to our damned phones. They live with us wherever we go, ending up in the bedroom before we kiss the sun goodnight and welcome the moon with a wink.

What if you own a company that has industrial secrets?

From board meetings to conceptual design meetings, all those phones have ears.

“What we willingly surrender for safety, the government will use for tyranny.”  -Scott

Phones should have a removable battery. That would facilitate two things. First, it would make the phone customer repairable, as the battery is the Achilles heel of the phone. Second, without the battery installed, the phone is truly off.

If companies want to integrate AI into their phones, they should design them with removable batteries.

In Conclusion…

The image of the robot on Lost in Space comes to mind. The machine that started the series is etched in my memory – it woke up, thrashing its arms, and let out a deafening cry of “DESTROY DESTROY DESTROY…”  

The Robot, serving as the villain’s surrogate, played a crucial role in numerous episodes. Through its actions, it embodied Dr. Smith’s evil. Its vulnerability—a mere five-inch square power pack on its back—added to the suspense.

The power pack is the missing piece that will revolutionize AI. We need a simple and efficient method to turn it off. An overwhelming number of individuals claim to be the real Dr. Smith.

I would love for you to check out my latest novel Earth’s Last Hope.

-Best